Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
It is often said that death penalty for those who committed violent crimes is necessary to keep the strict legal system. Nevertheless, other people say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. My own view on the matters is that without it we will be threatened and become more vulnerable to violence. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument about capital punishment followed by my opinion.
On the one hand, we have no right to kill other human since the survival right is the ultimate right of mankind. Another point worth noting is that we can kill innocent people due to unfair sentences. Our society is more and more complicated. In a case, people without power will often lose a lawsuit because of some corruption. Therefore, we should consider this kind of punishment because it can make people face execution while being wrongfully convicted. Last but not least, in terms of humanism, death penalty is quite merciless. Everyone need a chance to start again from the beginning. We should also pave the way for the criminals, especially juvenile crimes to help them to be re-educated in the society.
On the other hand, there are many advantages of death penalty. Firstly, it prevents serious crimes. For some individuals committing particularly serious crimes, their existence in the society is extremely dangerous, and they will threaten the lives of many members of the community. Therefore, the application of capital punishment to them is necessary. Then, even though the offenders no longer live, it will be a lesson to help others stay away all intentions as well as committing offences. The criminals have fear of the death penalty which prevents them from doing crimes. Moreover, death penalty is a form of revenge which gives a feeling of peace for the victim. Otherwise, many times a victim converted into offender to take revenge by own. Lastly, it reduces expenses on maintenance of prisoners. Instead of spending a lot of money on maintenance of prisoners, this money can be used for the development of the society and welfare of the people.
All thing considered, I believe that the advantages of capital punishment outweigh the disadvantages. Capital punishment is the best way of controlling criminals, preventing other people from committing offences and reduce expenses of national budget.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12435233161 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85823510339 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544041450777 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.548382523 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4166666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70833333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 21.0 3.9879759519 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357957947526 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868737334806 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868430793733 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209843901689 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782195396547 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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