Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crime of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. to what extend do you agree or disagree?
By developing cities and extending population, authorizes have special concertation for regulation which has control the violence and criminal in the city. The result of this decision leads to have decreasing violence, organize the society and variety of regulation. In this essay discuss the disagreeing and agreeing about this controversial issue.
From 2000 years ago, international societies under variety of government have been facing many rules which have approved by authorizes, which help to sustain the security in the cities. Moreover observing the law on of crucial duty which people have to act within avoiding the law. For instance, in the third world countries, the crime rate has been decreased by police, which enforces the law in society. In general, it needs to observe that law comes to pretend us of nasty activities.
Some many people from developed country strongly believe that have organized condition for society is a vital factor. It helps to improve the community .however, lack of rules should be done by participating people and governments. To make complete this point, approximately half of 50% of people in China tend to maintain the busy street in rush hour in the capital city.it is essential to say that, if all aspect of law had approved in every country we definitely would have made progress to increase the offensive behaviour of people. And being organized have been being famous these days.
Some critics have a focus on the subject that, regulation has been complicated nova days. In the developing country, lack of knowledge about international management of the UN and another country leads to every organization have own rules for themselves. And, following the rules insist other organizations obey general the same structure. Although the regulation requires to reshape gain to enhance time and facilities. To sum up, power is not having the diversity of rules in the world.
In conclusion, individuals and organization under government look should have obeyed the rules for keeping modern society from disorders behaviour, however, sometime in need to decrease object for avoiding complicated law for everyone.
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Did you mean 'reshaping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reshaping
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... avoiding complicated law for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, third, for instance, in conclusion, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31486880466 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86834538503 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568513119534 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7266545897 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.235294118 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0527014885391 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0172817731933 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311888210684 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0318570912089 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355314588357 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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