You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Although, some humans believe that when you stop to feed yourself by animals like meat and fish will help the planet being healthier. But I do not believe that this thought is really works once all the humans are hunting and eating animals since when the human life started.
I agree with this thought when they want to fight against the companies that make animal suffer mistreatment and are just thinking in making money from the animal's life. However, this is the food chain and it will never going to finish because is the natural of the life. On the other hand people who want to become a vegetarian is going to start to make a difference and certainly they will teach for their children and the human thoughts can be changed in the near future.
In my opinion this is not going to be a benefit for the world as everyday born more animals and this chain will continue for longer. But I respect the people who thinks in other way and want to stop to eat this kind of food to try change the world. Moreover, I agree with this people when they say that the companies are nor being respectful with the animals and I believe that this should be change as soon as possible by using the laws which protect animals of this situation.
It can be concluded that if you want to make the difference you need to start doing it by yourself and not wait for the others who maybe is not going to approve your thoughts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
... just thinking in making money from the animals life. However, this is the food chain a...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...hange the world. Moreover, I agree with this people when they say that the companies...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changed'?
Suggestion: changed
...imals and I believe that this should be change as soon as possible by using the laws w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4030418251 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13356439736 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494296577947 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4896454626 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230820201487 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108881986767 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480273251005 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139465014717 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712660891983 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.