You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
It is observed that continuous usage of computer has more side effects than any benefits on the children. I completely agree with this as I have myself seen the harm the computer is causing on the kids. Continuous usage cause irritation in the eyes which in return cause headaches and it is also seen that the kids tends to lack on any physical activities which has resulted in affecting their mental and physical states.
Using a computer for a long time has a major impact on the eyes. The computer emits harmful rays which on directly hitting the eyes causes the eyes to get tired. It is also observed that the user usually do not blink the eyes which causes the eyes to gets dry fast. Tired and dry eyes cause irritation to the kids and they tend to have headaches daily. If we compare to the kids 20 years back, now majority of children in the age group of 5-10 years are wearing specs.
While the computer itself has a lot of games in it, though these games are graphically advance which gives the users a real life experience but due to such games the kids do not tend to go out and do physical activities. Now a days there are games which you can with know or unknow payers, as a result of these types of games the social life with family and friends also deteriorates. They play such games for hours which has drastically affected their physical health and mental health. Recently a news shows that a kid used his parents credit card to shop for items in the games.
To summarizse the above, I believe that computer has far more negative impacts on the kids rather than doing any good to them by affecting their physical and mental state at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...d to go out and do physical activities. Now a days there are games which you can with know...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... go out and do physical activities. Now a days there are games which you can with know...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...ical health and mental health. Recently a news shows that a kid used his parents credi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45276872964 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25453761824 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521172638436 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.002840156 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138499232221 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576426697012 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452529062695 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898262665886 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228749789476 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.