You were recently helped by an employee at the airport. Write to the airport to
Describe the problem
Talk about how you were helped
Suggest how to reward the employee
Dear Sir or Madam,
Greeting of the day. I am writing this letter to appreciate your one of an incredible staff member who helped me during my bad time.
My flight from Delhi to London was scheduled on 24th April, 2020 at 5 PM and during security check I come to know that I lost my passport inside the airport premises. I tried my hard to find the same but left quite hopeless even searching for half an hour here and there.
I had a meeting in my London office and it was important for me to reach at time. But I was feeling bad about losing my passport then I met Ravi one of your staff coordinator and he helped me to search my passport and he skipped his lunch time to helped me. However, fortunately we found my passport before flight take off and I board the plane on time only because of Ravi.
I barely got any time to thank him due to my flight time. But I have attached amazon voucher with this letter as a token of appreciation for his dedication towards his job also please tell him to keep up the good work.
Regards,
Piyush Malik
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2020'.
Suggestion: April 2020
...m Delhi to London was scheduled on 24th April, 2020 at 5 PM and during security check I com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26732673267 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27507431546 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5137605015 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737306766717 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269327927736 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329135765026 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049255257086 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306886308125 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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