Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation. Why is this the case? What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?
Today, young adults around the world have bigger voices and more influence compared to in the past. The main reason behind this is because the young now possess more money and this development is creating a distance between old and young generations.
The principal reason why young people in modern society have more power than previous young generations is because most of them now have a huge possession of money. As jobs these days give remarkably higher incomes compared to in the past, more young adults now have bigger assets of money and higher social status. As a result, their opinions become more recognized and can easily influence the crowd. For example, many young employees of Facebook and Microsoft, who make over 150 thousand dollars a year, can make any random comments on online social networks and most people will just agree and follow the ideas of these individuals.
However, having more influence also means that young people are destroying relationships with older generations. In other words, when the young have more control in society, old people would feel more useless and they would choose to keep distance as they are aware that their opinions will not be highly rated. This leads to less communication and interaction between the two generations. For instance, a survey showed that most successful young businessmen in Ho Chi Minh City who have high values to the Vietnamese government rarely have conversations with their parents at home.
In conclusion, it is indeed that young generations in modern time have bigger influence thanks to them being able to generate more money, however, this development is also separating young ones from older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56873581684 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8285076515 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482491442887 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193029869234 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103107055378 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308416619945 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460414857318 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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