Agree Disagree. attending their classes should be optional
Schools have changed a lot over the past few decades, and some of them are experimenting with new ideas about classroom attendance.
Personally, I believe that it is still extremely important for students to be present for all of their classes. I feel this way for two main reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, attending classes gives students opportunities to develop useful skills by participating in discussions and debates. Most universities students are very opinionated, so they often engage in very lively discussions. Consequently, by actually going to their classes, students can develop public speaking and the ability to win people over.My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a freshmen i took an introductory political science seminar. The professor began each session by distributing an article about a controversial social issue. In addition, one student was selected to argue in favor of their position on the issue and respond to questions from the rest of the class. After doing this for one year i became an extremely confident public speaker. These days i work in a fast-paced corporate environment, where i feel no anxiety when negotiating with new clients or when i have to convince them to accept a new contract. If i had not attended the aforementioned class i would not be thriving in my current career.
Secondly, university classrooms provide chances to network with the like-minded individuals we can work with later on
The unemployment rate has been quite long for most of the past decade, and as a result, it is very difficult for even very well educated people to find jobs. However, many experts argue that the people we meet at universities play a major role in our long term professional success. For instance, my brother recently established a lucrative online business which has provided him with a substantial income.
He co-founded the form in a partnership with two like-minded peers that he meet in a computer science class during his senior year. He is very proud of the degree he earned at school, but he feels the deep connection which he formed with his classmates has been more valuable. In my opinion, had he not attended that class he would not have had enough support to launch his company.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that it is very beneficial for students to attend all of their classes. This is because it helps them to perfect their communication skills and because it helps them to perfect their communication skills, and because it gives them opportunities to connect with possible business partners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01834862385 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97773207476 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552752293578 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2517098143 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126682058065 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434483852914 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575312108517 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506284113263 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04930525547 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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