Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationships.
There is no little doubt that the various behaviours of the people affect their relationships directly. One of the most crucial fact to keep in mind is that telling lies will easily destroy the trust between human beings. It is my firm belief that being truthful is the only key of becoming successful in each society and I will develop this idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
The most significant point to be mentioned is that if you tell lies again and again, finally nobody would rely on you and this will make you isolated from others. Take my personal experience as an example, when I was in elementary school, one of my friends used to make stories about their life and her family. She told many lies about being in financial problem and a difficult condition of living. May be she wanted to draw others' attention to herself. Gradually we found out that all her stories were nothing but lies. After a while, her mother became seriously seek and she was really in trouble this time. But nobody relied on her and tried to make her calm and this isolation is a obvious effect of telling lies.
Another equally important fact is that telling the lies can be destructive for families. Due to the fact that people expect their families to be the most reliable people in their lives. But imagine if a husband hide the truth from his wife, she would always be concern about what he is doing out of the home or where he is going and would become suspicious about him. This marriage will not last for a long time and not being honest usually leads to divorce.
Finally, some people may argue that sometimes we cannot tell the truth because we do not want to hurt the listener by bad news and they call it "white truth". However, from my vantage point depriving people from hearing the truth can adversely affect their lives. To shed light on this a survey has recently done in which people were asked that "Would you prefer to hear a bad news or a white lie"? and more than 85% of them answered hearing bad news is more preferable to them since a white lie may torture their feelings in the future.
All in all, telling the truth is the most important consideration in relationships, for it creates and maintains the truth among people and it brings more friendship and a better life for individuals.
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- Independent writing TPO 51 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives 73
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to sch 70
- should parents give money to their children for studying 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
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Line 2, column 686, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... to make her calm and this isolation is a obvious effect of telling lies. Anoth...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the home or where he is going and would become suspicious about him. This marria...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...o hear a bad news or a white lie'? and more than 85% of them answered hearing ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y torture their feelings in the future. All in all, telling the truth is the mos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59518072289 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4363507355 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4878571048 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.368421053 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190954927893 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519607443262 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064922533864 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124785729738 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784397380405 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.