automobile have improved modern life.
There is no question that automobiles have improved modern life. Although some people think that cars and vehicles have provided harmful disadvantages like polluting the environment, I strongly agree with the statement. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, invention of automobile has provided more job opportunities for people persuing their future career. without invention of cars, people have to find a job near their home and if a job opportunity was so far away from their hose, like in another city, they have to leave their family and lived in the city. but now, buy using private car, people have better chance to work in different city without living there. For example, my family live in countryside, which does not contain lots of valuable job opportunities for graduated students. When I finished my master degree, I searched for a job related to my major in university. Unfortunately, I was unable to find a good career in my town. So I started looking for a job in cities near to out town. After a while, I found a very good job with qiuet well amount of salary. The office was very far away from us and it was not easy for me to use public transportation to commute and I did not have enough money for renting a house near to my office. So my father decided to buy me a car and I traveled between my office and home with it. If it was not for my car, I was not able to work in my dream job.
Second, cars have made it easier for people to communicate with their family and visit them more often. Todays, family member are far away from each other in order to find a job, study or persue their personal dreams. before invention of the cars, people had the chance to visit their family only in holidays and special ceremoney. but now, they can use their car and travel long distance in a short time and they can stay connected to their family even they live in a distance. For example, my sister studied in Shiraz city, which is located about 1000 kilometers away from us. At first year of university, she could not come home very often, because the distance was so long and it was not affordable for us to pay for fly every month. She only could come home during the new year and spring holiday. As a result she always missed our birthdays and party and we were all upset about this situation. but in second year, thanks to the loan that my sister gained form university, she bought a car for herself. it abled my sister to come home every month. so as my experience, cars have made modern life easier.
In sum, cars have made life easier and improved modern life by creating more job opportunities and making communication more convenient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, well, while, for example, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48888888889 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47222217063 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482828282828 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5309219091 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4615384615 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0384615385 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57692307692 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170405138088 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676912845581 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160613989466 0.0737576698707 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199591970069 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140293455066 0.0645574589148 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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