Better for children to grow up in the countryside than in big city
The learning age of every person is his childhood age, he/she can learn most things in his childhood age. Generally in childhood age you can learn anything is very quickly, the learning capacity of any person is higher in this age, and hence it is very important that how he/she can grow and where he/she can grow.
When any children start grow in his childhood he can catch many things from nearby society or environment, and he can starting behaving like that, hence it is important that where he/she can grow. Now a day this is a technological and industrial automated word, and it is also important thing that children are having knowledge about that technology and automation. The many technology and industrial automation are available in cities, it means the cities are stronger in technologies and industrial automation than rural areas or countryside.
Health is one of the most important factor in human’s life. There are many big hospitals and high qualified doctors are generally present in cities, there are also medical technological instrument are present in cities, that much of technology and doctors are not present in rural or countryside areas. There are also many things are important for the children are present in the city areas, like playing grounds, educational systems, industries etc.
Children grow in city he has got many things proper than the countryside like he get well health, also he get proper education and technologies. He can grow with technical as well as physical knowledge. Hence, I disagree with the children’s are better growing in countryside area than city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The learning age of every person is his ...
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...e can grow and where he/she can grow. When any children start grow in his chil...
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Suggestion: start
...arby society or environment, and he can starting behaving like that, hence it is importa...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun technology seems to be countable; consider using: 'many technologies'.
Suggestion: many technologies
...out that technology and automation. The many technology and industrial automation are available...
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...ion than rural areas or countryside. Health is one of the most important fact...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'instruments'?
Suggestion: instruments
...s, there are also medical technological instrument are present in cities, that much of tec...
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... educational systems, industries etc. Children grow in city he has got many th...
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...many things proper than the countryside like he get well health, also he get proper educati...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ngs proper than the countryside like he get well health, also he get proper educati...
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...ryside like he get well health, also he get proper education and technologies. He c...
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... growing in countryside area than city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12830188679 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84185269419 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467924528302 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.455696191 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218434631162 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953652598811 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932277330424 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138700545041 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942612928546 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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