Many people visit museums when they travel to new place. why do you think people visit museums. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Museums are reflecting history as well as the culture of any country or state. In museum there are present various thinks that introduce us the history of that particular state. Many people visited to museums when they are travel to different places. In my opinion people are visited to museum because they would like understand history of that place also, many people has their hobby to visit historical places. In following essay I will explain the reasons and example in the support of my opinion.
Firstly, many people have their hobby to gain knowledge about history and culture of various countries. When they are travel at various places, they always try to visit museum or historical places in that area. They are tried to serve their hobby. We have a two museum in my city; the names are “Botanical Garden” and “Coin Collection”. Both have a great collection of thinks that provide various knowledge about history and culture of city. In “Botanical Garden” present the history of the “Great Maratha Warrior Chatrapati Shivaji Maharaj” and in coin collection museum it present all types of Coins that are used in Indian economy.
Second, many people are visited to museum for their historical research purpose. Today everyone wants detail knowledge about any particular history; hence it is necessary to learn or to do research about that topic. We know the museums are the best way to find any knowledge about the history.
Thirdly, many people are visited to museum only for their enjoyment. Everyone likes to enjoy their life, they want a store all memory when they are go for traveling at different places. The structure of museum is very different and attractive comparatively other building constructions.
In conclusion, Peoples are visited to museum for basically three types of purpose. First is to serve their hobby and second is the kind of research purpose. They can also travel the purpose of only their enjoyment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1801242236 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76346565197 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453416149068 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4691873411 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321157274435 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117339893449 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114883944013 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196112839073 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932429721958 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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