Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
Politics can be a powerful or a dreadful subject. It can lead to constructive discussions, but it also can lead to terrible arguments. This essay will state why young teenagers should not be allow to vote and choose a country's future.
First of all, most of the children age 15 and over are still immature and quite often they do not have a personality already developed, which leads to uncertainty. Kids with 15 years old are always using their parents as a mirror, as a result they will copy their actions and political thoughts until they develop a better knowledge about politics and pros and cons that come along with it.
Furthermore, the lack of knowledge regarding politics and the consequences of voting in a wrong candidate can cause a huge negative impact on people's life. Putting children to vote would increase the number of voters, however the lack of interest that they have in this specific topic will not benefit the society.
Moreover, kids can be easily mislead if candidates decide to take advantage of their young age and naiveness, which can result in a bigger issue, such as young adults disbelieved on the political system.
In conclusion, 15 years old kids should have more time to prepare themselves before stand against the candidates, in that way they can choose wisely and with more confidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'voting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: voting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9203539823 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64764504372 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1684615087 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.555555556 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 5.45110844103 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242981939256 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922918208551 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721762052853 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110179927595 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375856465438 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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