Universities and colleges are important part of each modern society. In these places, people can learn and do research which will be beneficial for the entire society. In addition to classes which are a normal part of every university, there are some sports and social activities in them which some people think that they should be dealt with as important as the classes because it will improve the social skills of the students. However, from my point of view, I disagree with them for two reasons.
To begin with, the primary purpose of each university is to transfer knowledge and conduct research. In fact, there is no place in a society that can perform these tasks with the quality that are done in universities. Therefore, classes and libraries are the most important part of universities and the financial support they receive should be superior to what sports and other activities receive. For example, one of my friends studied in a university far from the capital. The university dean decided to give an equal amount of money to both classes and other adjunct activities. The result was disastrous for the students because the facilities in classes and libraries books are out of date. Many of their classes were cancelled due to the broken apart facilities. Moreover, the alumni had a lot struggle in finding suitable jobs after graduation because their knowledge were superficial compared with the others that graduate from universities that emphasize more on classes. However, this is not the only reason that I disagree with the statement.
Apart from the fact that most students enter universities in order to educate in their field of interests, they can obtain the skills they gain in sport and social activities somewhere else in society. For example, they can go to gyms or other sport related places to engage in sports they desire. For example, when I was a university student, I was interested in learning and playing basketball. However, the related activity was not dealt with in my university. I went to a local class near my home. There, I got familiar with some high quality instructors that I could not find in my university.
To summarize, although some people think that sport activities are as important as classes in universities, I think that classes are much more important because the main purpose of each university is to transfer knowledge and the students can obtain the other competencies in other specialized centers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'class'?
Suggestion: class
...ith in my university. I went to a local class near my home. There, I got familiar wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0243902439 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73280030399 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460975609756 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.190750827 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312031678282 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871753983288 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104950518194 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191308050488 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488081316086 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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