A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your
community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence
on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your
position.
Building a large factory is a big deal, even for bigger cities. I live in a capital city of Montenegro, Podgorica. It has about 200 thousand citizens and although it is the capital city it is small comparing to other European capitals and building a factory in it, is very welcomed. My country is in transition, it strives for EU integration and since it is one of the poorest countries in Europe every big investment, especially in industry is very important. I’m sure that a new, large factory in my community would be beneficial for people living in that area and wider, but we have to be cautious. I’ll try to give some positive and negative views about this.
First positive thing that will come from having a new factory in the area is new job positions. factories usually need big number of employers from different professions. This is a chance to reduce unemployment and to give people a chance to work. Now formerly unemployed people can raise their living standard and satisfaction of living in our community in general.
Besides new job positions, a factory will surely have a major impact on economy of the whole city and even on the cities in the near. Workers will come from neighborhood cities which mean that the factory affects their economy as well. Also workers who come from other cities will spend part of their salaries in the city of employment, on that way budget of the city and community will increase.
Factories are usually producing goods which are later distributed and sold to customers. If products are of a good quality, and if you have a good trading connection you can sell the products even outside the country. Having trade, business and economy relations with other countries it can attract new investors to the area and maybe opening new factories.
Those are some of the positive examples, but we have to be very careful and serious about negative impacts of having a factory in a community. Mainly, here, I think about environment and nature, plants and animals. Unfortunately we are witnesses of a careless devastation of the nature around us.
So having a new factory can affect community on a different good ways, but we have to be careful and take care of environment that we live in and to prevent any possible nature disasters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, well, i think, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88607594937 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71467966054 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478481012658 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0100902218 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158961334347 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531504063366 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446158793507 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824137908512 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264008860844 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.