How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and
specific examples to support your answer.
Movies and the tv have a great influence on people's behavior. In the past people had to go to the cinemas to watch a movie or to rent it and watch at home, but today in the era of the internet, movies and even tv content are available on different portable devices. Besides television and movies, very important are popular series and tv shows that surely impact people's behaviour and mood, habits and sometimes way of life. In the next few chapters I will try to give and explain a few examples of what I said earlier.
First, different tv content and movies are created for the variety of target groups of people. teens and young people usually watch popular series, music shows, movies and on that way they find their role models, someone who they will try to imitate in real life, and on that way celebrities influence behavior of teens. On the other hand older people are interested in other kind of tv content such as news, political and economic programme, and their behavior is less likely to be affected. Things that they watch on the tv usually influence their mood, which lead us to the second point I want to make.
Secondly, as I said movies, tv shows, series influence people's mood. Depending on what kind of movie genre they are watching, people's mood can be changed and left under the impression that can last for a certain time after watching. Comedies usually improve people mood, but drama or horror movies can make negative feeling as stress, sadness, grieve.
My last example will be about documentaries and motivational videos and movies that in my opinion can affect people's behavior in the best possible way. Documentaries can increase someone's general knowledge, inform them about things they haven't known before or people could learn new skills. motivating videos, messages, series can lift people up, boost their enthusiasm, change their life and even make them make life-changing decisions.
For the conclusion I would like to say that on the tv and the internet there is something for everyone, that everybody should watch what they like and try to gain the best from the content that is served to us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80758807588 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44311310406 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517615176152 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3540645195 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.266666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169063984532 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718433974621 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575960549673 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965566660441 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559504603272 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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