Do you agree with the following statement: It is a waste of money for government to fund space travel or space exploration
Some people think that it is a waste of budget for the government to spend on space traveling and space exploration. Others think that the government should allocate more budget to support scientists and astronauts explore the outer space. Personally, I agree with the statement that funding space travel or space exploration is basically a waste of money.
First of all, most governments care about their reputation, and if they disburse too much money on space traveling, they might get an extremely bad image. For instance, three months ago, the CEO of Amazon spent billions of dollars having a vacation on the space. Consequently, many people feel repulsive about his action, because they coincidentally agree that he should have donated this money to the charity instead to contribute to the society. Had he given away the money spend on his space traveling as philanthropy, he could have gained a better reputation. The situation is quite similar for the government. That is to say, if the government spend its budget on practical things rather than space traveling, it can gain a better reputation from the citizens.
In addition, the government focuses on efficiency a lot, and sending astronauts or scientists to conduct space exploration might compromise its efficiency to a great extent. For example, a single trip to the Moon might take two to three years. This means that the government must wait for several years in order to procure the research results from astronauts. Moreover, the government might need to waste a significant amount of time gathering all resources required for space exploration, such as food, oxygen, and water. In other words, planning a trip to the space is extremely time-consuming. Nevertheless, if the government does not issue this proposal, they can have more time to spend on other important works, such as solving the severe traffic jam in the downtown.
Finally, the government should care about citizen’s welfare, and spending too much money on space exploration means that the government must cut budgets on citizen’s welfare. To be more specific, space traveling requires more than a billion dollars, and I believe that most countries do not have that extra money. Accordingly, the government might have no choice but to cut down some expenses on upgrading the basic infrastructure, universal healthcare, college tuition subsidies and so on. If this is the case, citizens might not gain enough money to pay for their medical treatments. Similarly, students may need to spend a great deal of time doing part-time job in order to gain enough money to pay for their tuition. Nonetheless, if the government does not spend this money, citizens can obtain enough welfare to live a normal and happy life.
In conclusion, I maintain that spending money on space exploration is a waste of money, because the most basic duty of a government is to care about citizen’s welfare, working at a high efficiency, as well as maintaining its reputation, not exploring the space.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, finally, first, if, incidentally, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in other words, that is to say, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 8.0752688172 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2537.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13562753036 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9019537172 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.918383398 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.318181818 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 5.45110844103 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438056742876 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14190517153 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132726257735 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290445722838 0.150856017488 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139442610113 0.0645574589148 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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