Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the present era of fast moving world time and tide waits for none and life goes on even if there is a minor disruption. Some people argue that it is not required to have a schedule in life while others believe that planning is necessary for smooth and safe life. I am in complete accord with the viewpoint that there needs to be a proper schedule for every action taken in our life. The following paragraphs elucidates the importance of a regular and steady life.
Admittedly, it is easy to live life without any organisation and planning, eventually there will be a lot of trouble in the due course of time. This not only affects the safety of our life but will also start interrupting the family life too. However, if we start planning out well it will be easier for a person to handle the difficulties that comes across life. For instance, as a person settles down after having a job he will make his life tension and stress free. Since he does not need to worry about debt. Likewise, planning in the monetary aspects of life which includes investments can provide him with money even after retirement. Hence, it is necessary to have an organised life.
Furthermore, a clutter free life can make things easier and happy. The lack of proper planning can cause unnecessary expense and waste time. For instance, before buying a house it is necessary to analyse the pros and cons of buying it otherwise, the troubles associated with it will make life harder. Here a lot of money will be lost and time too. therefore, it is imperative that decisions ought to be taken after careful planning.
Lastly, to attain an excellent professional life too, is it important to follow a strict guidelines. A careless life can result in total loss of human energy and efficiency. For example, if a person needs to reach greater heights in his company’s position from software beginner to a senior most position he needs to work hard, attain more education and training. Besides, these cannot be attained without planning. therefore, in any realm of society one lives it is of utmost important to work consistently and be more organised.
To reiterate, it is quite important that life needs to be organised and every step be carefully planned to avoid mistakes. Success is the result of consistent hard work which cannot be embarked without reducing the clutter and laziness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, likewise, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83211678832 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65936628356 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515815085158 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0394283559 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.347826087 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8695652174 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145409165062 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472871981785 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399535645955 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880540748144 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525946506854 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.