Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The 21th century has witnessed a rapid growth of arts and sports. However, since both of these activities are highly relied on government support, there is a debate on which of these activities should have more state support. Contrary to the idea hold by many people that governments should spend more money on arts, personally governments should focus their financial supports on sports, especially the support of athletics.
Initially, support of athletics could benefit people's health. it is no doubt that athletics is a good model who could attract people to participate in sports. since playing sports is able to improve people's health in different ways, the more people are involved in sports, the health the country will be. Imagine there is a state-sponsored athletic won the first prize in Olympic swimming game, people in the state will be encouraged by his achievement and take part in swimming. As we all know, swimming help people reduce fat and keep fit. As a result, the fat ratio will decrease and people in the state will become healthier, which could also reduce cost of state on health industry.
Moreover, support of athletics could build sports industry. Nowadays, sports industry has become a rising star in world market. some sports events like the world cup and Super Bowl often bring a huge amount of money to athletics, sports teams and other related industry. And support of athletics could attract them to play in the state, which will build local sports industry. For example, when I was young, a sportsman my hometown, a small city, won a very good prize in the national tennis competition. This event encourages lots of people nearby to take part in the tennis games in my hometown, which results in a huge growth of tennis-related industry in my hometown. What's more, the local government even surprisingly found that our local GDP had a surge these years.
Surely, governments could develop art industry by supporting arts. But the market value of it will be less compared to sports industry, since most people are more interested in sports competition like world cup, instead of art exhibition.
In conclusion, although supporting arts could have some benefits, supporting sports and athletics should be more efficient investment which could benefit both people's health and state economy for the government.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15584415584 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64916729694 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2111173621 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.473684211 100.406767564 104% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860383494418 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850613524657 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163980736898 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825421964719 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.