Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in today's world, everybody is looking for a good job which ensures him a good life in future. While some people believe that it is better to take a secure job as soon as possible, the others hold the view that it is better to wait and find a well-paid job which you adore. personally, I concure with the former group's viewpoint. The reasons substantiating my standpoint will be explored in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays, there are a hunge number of well-educated persons who are seeking for the job. Needless to say that the number of jobs which existes in todays' world is highly limited due to bad economic curcumestances in a variety of countries. So, it is safe that one accecpts every opportunity which they face. For example, when I would wanted to choose my field of the study in the university a few years ago, my father advised me to choose the major which it was clear that the persons who choose that field have the job after their graduation from the university. However, I insisted in opting my favorable major and now, after the graduation I am looking for job and still have not found any opportunity.
Moreover, people tend to reach a secure point in their life and then endeavour to amelionate different aspects of their life. To elaborate, when one have not chosen a job opportunity which they have found, they may not find any opportunity so soon. As a result, not only do they gain money in that period, but also it saps their confidence. So, it is caucious for someone to accept the first job opportunity they face. In this situation they feel comfortable and calm, and it is suitable time for them to improve their skills and looking for better positions.
As shown above, considering all the reasons and points mentioned above, one could conclude that it is an appropriate action to get a secure rather than waiting for a better opportunity. It is because, not only does the number of the works which exist goes down, but also everybody looking forward to reaching a safe point in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... good job which ensures him a good life in future. While some people believe that it is ...
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Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n future. While some people believe that it is better to take a secure job as soo...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
...d find a well-paid job which you adore. personally, I concure with the former groups viewp...
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Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
.... personally, I concure with the former groups viewpoint. The reasons substantiating m...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ch they face. For example, when I would wanted to choose my field of the study in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, then, well, while, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68306010929 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62133944128 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516393442623 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2220336206 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265154124524 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848991201051 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497874728379 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156086919438 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409400611973 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.