do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group.
First and foremost, being the leader improves one’s leadership skill. Sometimes, the leader is allowed to make decisions for the whole group. Since leader is the person who represents the group, he or she can select the solution that that affects the entire group. Leader contributes a big role in influencing and driving the group to the right direction. Moreover, since the leader builds his or her reputation through effective leading and successful planning, other groupmates tend to follow his or her decision. Leader are able to convinve others to go with their plan, there fore building trust with other members over time. Indeed, leading a group allows one to makes decisions and builds reputation in order to influence others.
Secondly, as a leader of a group, people can communicate better. The leader is the person who disseminates the plan for the groupmates. Since the leader knows almost everything about the group, they have to convey their ideas, rules, or plans to others. They need to communicate to their members in order to keep them informed. Furthermore, the leader is the person who represents the group to express their information to others. For example, when debating with other groups, the leader is the person with the greatest responsibilityin negotiating against others. By and large, being the leader creates a change for them to represent the group and convey inportant ideas, making them a skilled communicator.
Finally, being the leader helps people expand their relationship network. As a matter of fact, the leader tends to communicate more with other groups while members usually tackle problems with their groupmates. Since the commander has to talk to more people, their networking expanded over time. In addition, the leader is allowed to divide the team into smaller group. Since the commander has to connect each group with others, they have to talk with all members of the team. Meanwhile, members in each part only work with their teammates in that group. Indeed, the leader has a chance to not only talk to other groupmates but also connect with other people on behalf of the group.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 524, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...d to follow his or her decision. Leader are able to convinve others to go with thei...
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Line 1, column 575, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: therefore
... convinve others to go with their plan, there fore building trust with other members over ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, as a matter of fact, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09686609687 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60197107751 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467236467236 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.943090855 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.1904761905 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90476190476 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343127440813 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121723735897 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538987220856 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26057986978 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169202305692 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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