Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
This statement is fundamentally incorrect; working three days a week for a long time is better than working five days a week and in shorter hours; in my point of view I think that working in few days of week for a long time has significant disadvantages for both the human and the company that we work for it. Therefore, I totally disagree with the statement and I want to reinforce my opinion from the following aspects.
The chief reason why I generally disagree with statement is that we can’t concentrate if we work for a long time, so we can make lots of mistakes. for example, one year ago, I had long project of typing and I had to type in few days, but after I finished it and want to revise, I recognized I made lots of mistake which I never done if I have little more time.
The second reason why I generally disagree with the statement is that if we work by the tempo that the statement asserts, we will get really tired which in turn couldn't shoulder our other responsibilities. Since most behind our worker are a father, mother, sister and friend. Vividly in order to spend time with them, we have to work shorter hours and save energy to them. For example, I never can forget the year that my father should work hard, since my uncle got sick and my father have to take care from his brother families. I would remember that he was very tired after a long work and he came back to the home he just slept and never have time to spend with us.
Last but not the least, although working few days longer time get the opportunity to make a new job positions, it is can't be a constant job. Besides, the companies have to buy lots of computer and finding new area to their new staff.
All in all, some of the people keep the view point that by working for a long time for a few days give them the chance to spend more time with their families on the other days, but I think this rhythm of the working make them so tired that they can't rest and feel relaxes in the other days of the week to feel better and devote time to their dears.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... time, so we can make lots of mistakes. for example, one year ago, I had long proje...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun mistake seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of mistakes'.
Suggestion: lots of mistakes
...and want to revise, I recognized I made lots of mistake which I never done if I have little mor...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... we will get really tired which in turn couldnt shoulder our other responsibilities. Si...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nity to make a new job positions, it is cant be a constant job. Besides, the compani...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...area to their new staff. All in all, some of the people keep the view point that by work...
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Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...he working make them so tired that they cant rest and feel relaxes in the other days...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, really, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30442867183 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454081632653 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.5580603777 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.6045352989 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338688456673 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118393672998 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947993553633 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19855347739 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102500423393 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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