Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Nowadays, there are more competitions between cities all over the world. Every citiy want itself to thrive and develop well. In this case, the financial support from governments is important to their cities, especially their major cities.
First, we know that a major city usually can represent a contry. For example, when we talk about the United States, most of people will think about New York City, which is one of the major cities in America and represents America dreams. New York City generates many American cultural, such as liberty and so on. In this case, this city usually have billions of visitors every year who want to take a look at the cultural traditions of the United States, and if this city is supported well by the government, all the travellers will like this city because of its prosperity.
Besides, since a major city is the orgin of a nation's culture and traditions, it is of great importance to support and make sure it can thrive. People in this nation can not withstand that their orgin of this country is in a bad condition due to lack of financial support, and if the government let it happens, the government will hurt its people's heart. For example, Xian is the orgin of Chinese culture, there were six dynasties who setted Xian as their capital, and even the most powerful dynest all over Chinese history, the Tang dynasty. People in China regrads it as the orgin of Chinese culture, and lots of people love it. If the Chinese government does not support Xian financially and let it decline, Chinese government will lost their support from their people.
At last, ensuring the major cities to thrive is still Important for a country to develop. We can imagine that there is a country who does not have a major city. In this country, people live in small towns, and small towns usually can not provide its people wich many job opportunitie. As a result, even if this country spends lot of money on education, it can not have many highly-educated people. Those people will find that it's hard for them to find suitable jobs in their own country since a small town usually does have many advanced industries. Then, they will move to other countries to look for jobs. In this case, without a major city, a nation can not develop well without help fo highly-educated people.
In conclusion, I want to states that major cities is of great importance for a nation due to their essential role in a nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
..., when we talk about the United States, most of people will think about New York City, which i...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...s, since a major city is the orgin of a nations culture and traditions, it is of great ...
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Line 5, column 736, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...let it decline, Chinese government will lost their support from their people. At ...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'many jobs'.
Suggestion: many jobs
...usually can not provide its people wich many job opportunitie. As a result, even if this...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'state'.
Suggestion: state
...ted people. In conclusion, I want to states that major cities is of great importanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, look, so, still, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71028037383 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50429799119 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446261682243 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0003703691 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23205782405 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807953857601 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634028286019 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152196564365 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396301717271 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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