Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, it is more important for people to make friends and connect with other people. There are neumores factors that affect on people's lives which need help and company with other people. On the other hand, immigration has an amiable impact on people's thoughts. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether moving to a new country often is not good for people because they lose their old friends or has a good impact. Some people possess the conviction that the former could be more agreeable whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is more gregarious. I personally, content that this issue is multifaceted.
To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is when we move to a new place it has a greater impact on our mental health and can be a good experience for us. We can familiar with a new culture and adapt ourselves to the new conditions. Although it completely changes our life disciplines and routines, we can make new friends through this journey. Consider my personal experience to make the point more clear. One of my friends migrated to abroad recently. In the first week of his residency, he felt sad and upset. He could not connect with new people and felt he was completely decided the wrong decision. But after several months, he joined with other peers and his classmates and slowly adapted to the new situation.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that when people travel to a new country, they should be more passionate and thirsty for new adventures faced with it. This attribute helps the theme to link with amiable people and has more opportunities for their future.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, I disagree with this statement and think it has more impact in a positive way on our future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...people. There are neumores factors that affect on peoples lives which need help and compa...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... statement and think it has more impact in a positive way on our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, in brief, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69210864929 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7073601735 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262043711614 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771015691325 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842400717364 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125658670599 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720729281333 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.