Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
When we look back on the old days that human beings had passed, we are amazed by the tremendous development that we made. Seeing all the things we possess today, comparing to the former generations, indeed, life is easier and more comfortable today rather than the days when our grandparents were children. I would like to reinforce my opinion from following aspects.
First of all, we live in a world that is so peaceful that had never appeared before. Decades ago, peace is such a desirable word for people around the world that they can only make dreams of it day and night. When I was a little girl, my grandmother always liked to tell me stories that happened in her childhood. She said that they always had to settle from one place to another to find a secure place to shelter. Moreover, every night they went to sleep with the companion of sound unuttered by gun or some other weapons. It seems that the world was entirely colored by blood. The society is chaotic and people are all thrown in wholly panic and horror. Every time when my grandmother told this kind of things, I can feel her sorrow and there always tears in her eyes. How fortunate we are to be born in such a peace time that we don’t need to bother with our security of life.
On the other hand, we enjoy a much higher quality of life than our grandparents do. Several years ago it is a crucial problem to fill people’s stomach. Even millions of people starve to death. While today we have a large quantity species of food to choose,and there also careful parents who schedule the nutritious food table for us. Not only can we have enough food to eat, but also live in a healthier life style. Furthermore, there were not many recreations before, nowadays we have the access of computer, TV and some other kind of high technical products. Via these things, we can retain a colorful and vigorous life. For instance, if we miss some friends far away, we just need to make a phone call to contact with him/her instead of writing a long letter which would cost you several days even weeks. For another example, we traveled distance by foot before that was so fatigue while today we can by car or even by plane to far far away. Obviously, life becomes easier and more comfortable than generations ago.
In conclusion, today people own more happiness than before. Life is so decent and superb. As far as I am concerned, nowadays the only thing we need to do is that we should learn to cherish what we have possessed and endeavor to improve our society to a better world to live in. All people around the world should hand in hand to build a harmonious world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...large quantity species of food to choose,and there also careful parents who schedule...
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Line 5, column 932, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: far
...today we can by car or even by plane to far far away. Obviously, life becomes easier an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50730688935 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38453575832 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530271398747 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5919819106 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0384615385 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4230769231 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21310927825 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650576165681 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110166044999 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149730508873 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955601226987 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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