Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Metropolitan lives and fascinating inventions are the most important pillars of each society in today’s world. Due to the fact that people live in a chaotic and fast-paced world, we should consider that life nowadays is more convince rather than in the past.
A controversial question that is often raised regarding this question is whether life today is easier rather than in the past or not. Some people possess the conviction that their past lives are more comfortable and agreeable, whereas I think today’s lives are more convenient and pleaser. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraph represents a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is although today’s lives make some problems and drawbacks for us, like the air population, we cannot ignore the importance of some inventions, like using cars and factories. By using factories, our industries improved and our lives are easier. Consider the food factories. Although it makes air population and populated our environment, the fast food and food industry brings a situation where famine decreases and a huge number of the population faded.
The second rationale reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that in today’s lives, we have access to the moderated and some invasion like vaccine makes our lives more comfortable rather than in the past. In our grandparents' lives, there are many diseases and illnesses that there was no medicine and not enough drugs which makes a lot of pressure on society and the government to deal with these circumstances. Consider my personal experience to make this point more clear. When my grandparents were children, there were plugs in the country, and many people died due to the widespread. Today, on the other hand, with breakthrough vaccines and medicine, there is less rate of death.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I think life is more convenient and comfortable nowadays rather than past because there are many inventions in all of the industries and breakthroughs the science and life facilities.
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| 2023-07-18 | M. MEHRABI KERMANI | 60 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 157, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, i think, in brief, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21929824561 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88919222074 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2606090585 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278852115686 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838521105348 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706651542635 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151544740899 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730822821576 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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