Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.

Submitted by zavarehb on Wed, 05/01/2019 - 15:10

In today’s modern world, the galloping rate at which technology is flourishing has made the world a very changing environment which needs much of experiences to be a successful one. While there is a heated controversy whether difficult situations and experiences are good or not, I, personally, do believe that having abundant of hard experiences, especially in the young, is a very decent way for having the best possible life in the future. There are some reasons for such an opinion which I will present them underhere.
Without any shadow of a doubt, much of every individual lifetime is composed of dealing with the finding appropriate solutions for some problems. The harder the problem, the more required energy we have to put on that, by the word energy we mean both time and money. As in a well-known proverb,”Time is money,”, I believe that time worths mote than money; because, we may get the lost money by being hard-bitten and having perseverance, but we will never find the lost time. Consequently, I claim that time is the most precious thing which we should enjoy every moment of that. with the mentioned claims, it stands to reason that we have the most possible cares to tackle in the best manner with our experiences; which are the corner-stones of every successes we may get in the future. As a personal example, the most lovely teachers and other individuals in our life are those who have had more experiences on the grounds that they teach us their invaluable guidelines freely which helps us to save time and money-using them wisely. On the contrary, not having much experiences leads us to take some of our decisions based on try and error which could bring us harmful effects in our vital decisions, such as choosing the field of B.Sc. degree in the university, marriage, to name but a handful. Who would ignore such great advantages for just not burdening temporary challenges which we may face during the difficult experiences?
A decent person in any society has to with some of charactersitis such as being well-informed, being able to do teamwork, being healthy both mentally and physically, to name but a few. Tackling with abundant of hard experiences would bring us such decent advantages. Because of permanent dealing of people with eachother, which is a property of many creatures, the decent person would emanate such great properties in the whole society. Consequently, these lead to social solidarity of any given society.
In summary, with all these and many other reasons taken into account, I incline to the idea of tackling with the difficult situations and experiences in the best possible manner which will be as a great treasury for the future. Saving our time and money and consuming them in the most appropriate manner, and being a decent person in the society are just two of the most considerable reasons which I discussed in the above.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...me and money. As in a well-known proverb,'Time is money,', I believe that ti...
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...a well-known proverb,'Time is money,', I believe that time worths mote than ...
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Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worths'' or 'worth's'?
Suggestion: worths'; worth's
...me is money,', I believe that time worths mote than money; because, we may get th...
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Suggestion: many
...hem wisely. On the contrary, not having much experiences leads us to take some of ou...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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...isions, such as choosing the field of B.Sc. degree in the university, marriage, to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, well, while, as to, in summary, such as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2417.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93265306122 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89036731927 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479591836735 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 760.5 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3934940269 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.176470588 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8235294118 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193825252095 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067591929301 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426768517313 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127021975159 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528610485675 0.0645574589148 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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