Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The influence of movies and television shows on the audiences shall by no means be overlooked. That having been considered, whether these kind of media entertainments might affect young people negatively or not, is a crucial matter that deserve consideration. Despite arguments asserting that television and movies have negative effects on their audiences, I believe otherwise, maintaining that Tv and these kind of entertainments could have affect young people in a positive way since they can teach young people some lessons and new kind of Tv shows may influence people in a good way.
First and foremost, the crux of matter lies in the fact that television and movies may have some educational aspects for young people. Precisely speaking, young people affected by media in these days and if media try to produce useful shows for young people, it would help youth to learn many good things from Tv shows because today Tv shows and movies are attractive for people especially young one. The best example that fits to this point is learning English show that has been made by BBC channel which teach English to people by using some young executors who teach English to their audience in a modern way. Therefore, it goes without saying that movies and television could have some positive effects if they produce in a right way and they can improve young people talents.
Another point to consider is that new television's productions might have good effect on young people. To put it in apposite words, in basically new Tv shows may encourage young people to improve their selves which had not been considered in old movies. As a case in point, let's take the example of the exercise Tv shows that leads people to do more exercise even at home and these kind of shows try to introduce new kind of media's effects to people and modify the negative effects like gaining weight while watching television. Hence, as is clear, instead of negative effects of television, modern productions might have positive effects on young people too.
In final analysis, in spite of the fact that some might be of this conviction that television and movies would affect negatively on young people and they can use that time to read books or do more exercises which could help their mental and physical health, I take issue with them in this regard, and aver that television have some positive effects which improve young people's knowledge and health. In closing, it behooves producers to make suitable and influential movies for young people whom are affected by them and the future is in their hands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...d. That having been considered, whether these kind of media entertainments might affect yo...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ieve otherwise, maintaining that Tv and these kind of entertainments could have affect you...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ainments could have affect young people in a positive way since they can teach young people some...
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Suggestion:
...e in a positive way since they can teach young people some lessons and new kind o...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e some positive effects if they produce in a right way and they can improve young people talen...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...le to do more exercise even at home and these kind of shows try to introduce new kind of m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, kind of, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93607305936 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50274655742 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440639269406 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0234328569 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.307692308 100.406767564 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6923076923 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320091061512 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141526993637 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717793622535 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230789019903 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015020622128 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 11.7677419355 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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