Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In my country, young people have better lives than their parents had when they were young.
Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having a good life means that one is satisfied with one's life. Numerous generations have passed since the advent of human civilization, and each generation had different lives. Some people argue that the current generation is living a worse life than their parent’s generation. However, I personally agree with the statement aforementioned for two reasons: the advancement of technology and the proliferation of culture.
First and foremost, technology has been more advanced than ever before. To be specific, people discovered and invented numerous tools, such as the computer and the smartphone, and that helped people become more satisfied with their lives. For example, my mother once said that when she was a young child, the smartphone and computer weren't invented yet. She was very frustrated when she had to go to the library to find the information. When the computer and smartphone were invented, she was awed by the convenience that the two tools provided. As one can clearly see, the advancement of technology has contributed to a better life for the younger generation.
In addition, the profound culture that was created during the current generation also contributed to better lives for the young. In detail, new entertainments such as the movie theater provided young people with more satisfaction with their lives, as entertainment has a significant impact on people’s lives. An observational study held in 2018 at Seoul University had a survey where participants were asked of the amount of entertainment they had or have when they were young. The results showed that the younger generation had more choices of entertainment. The researchers concluded that this was because more and more kinds of entertainment have appeared in the last decade. This undoubtedly proves that the new cultures or entertainment has led to a better life for the young.
Admittedly, some could argue that the environment has dramatically worsened for the last decade, and there were particular cultures that disappeared in the current generation. However, as new technologies and cultures helped the young people to have better lives, I strongly agree with the statement above that in my country, young people have better lives than their parents' young lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...d life means that one is satisfied with ones life. Numerous generations have passed ...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...oung child, the smartphone and computer werent invented yet. She was very frustrated w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32033426184 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00113649224 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473537604457 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4682850979 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325155220025 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979823303528 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091503032004 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217750662941 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787481240946 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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