Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have different views about obtaining information from various sources. Personally, I agree that so as to being high-knowledge, people should get information from different sources. I feel this way for some rationale which I can elaborate upon hereunder.
To begin with, given the fact that, people are busy with making new decisions and overcoming possible trouble, they refer to new resources related to their work. Besides, new resources might be highly beneficial and would paramount importance while they are thinking of an important decision. To prove this I have an example in my personal life. A few years ago once I was graduated from university and I was looking for a suitable job, someone suggested me to work in a company located in an outlying tropical area, but since I used to search before doing something, I found out that area is only suitable for job with a high salary but it is not livable. If I just thought about the salary, I might go there and it causes me serious problems.
Furthermore, getting information from different resources is overrides the importance of making a decision by ourselves and prevent to consult with others who are more experienced in that specific issue. Consequently, having consultancy with others might be highly beneficial and our decision will not be confined to only one resource. Besides, apart from the people around us, the internet plays a vital role in our decision making as opposed to people, because the Internet contains new up-to-dates information, while people do not. For instance, a friend of mine wanted to change her laptop, as she did not have any knowledge about it and never searched for it, she has bought a laptop which was not working properly without surfing on the Internet.
All in all, by taking all the points into account, I vehemently assure that attaining information from various resources and getting consultancy definitely important in our decisions making. Not only help people to make accurate decisions, but also help people to avoid possible wrong decisions in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...rious sources. Personally, I agree that so as to being high-knowledge, people should get...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... only one resource. Besides, apart from the people around us, the internet plays a vital role in our...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, while, apart from, as to, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04956268222 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79767043362 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580174927114 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2591475517 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189208231678 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717872659771 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701086626658 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120844907462 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417960117196 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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