Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, money is a prominent mean to live a life, in another word, money talks. Most of the people believe that children at young age should not be worried about how to manage their money, while others hold precisely the opposite perspective. I firmly believe that children should be able to manage their money before they enter adulthood. I will elaborate my reasons within following paragraphs.
Firstly, there is no doubt that a child’s fresh mind can extend various abilities in order to shape its thoughts at its early stages. Actually, these adepts would help them to spend money wisely when they become older. As a consequence, psychologically speaking, when they become older, they would be not only financially independent but also feel self-confidence. For instance, when I was a child, my parents always gave me allocated pocket money each month and I was not allowed to ask for more for the rest of the month; thanks to them, now I know how to manage my bank account and save money for urgent times. It is crucial importance for kids to overcome small tasks as minor paradigm of real life like managing their money at young age.
Secondly, children would value money as they become more cautious about spending their cash. Generally speaking, most of the independent people had been influenced by their family at young age, because proper and chiefly middle-class families would teach their own offspring that money does not grow on trees. In another word, when they figure it out the hard part of making money, they would be more careful about managing it. For example, most of the kids that were born with a silver spoon on their mouth, have no idea how to work for a living and as a result they would never be able to manage their finance. Nevertheless, being a responsible and prosperous adult is mainly affected by childhood; it is obvious that childhood has an indelible impact on a person’s characteristics and values.
Lastly, there is another class of thought that children should not be worried about money and they should have free life. Generally, children should spend most of their time playing and have fun. Besides, their parents should provide them their needs instead of letting them spend it on their own; forcing children by limiting their budget in order to manage their money can not only cause mental damages but also create a void inside them, while their friends are spending freely without being stressed. According to a study, those children that have hard time in especially in working-class families face some traumas when they grow older like social anxiety. So, kids are sensitive creatures if their families do not be careful enough, they may break. In addition, parents should keep that in mind do not let their children be short on cash and limit the especially when they are going to school and enter bigger social environments.
In conclusion, there are several factors that comes after money and have major effects on people’s success when they are kids, like their families, schools, social environment, and so on. It is noteworthy, that there is a delicate edge between being happy as a kid and being wise enough to spend money.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2653.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 541.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90388170055 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52927211829 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512014787431 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 802.8 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4973191128 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.590909091 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5909090909 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243376900676 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829538605097 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481815576698 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148687970797 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611665790349 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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