Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
With regards to the massification of (Internet is a proper noun, always capital I) Internet usage and its consequences, I think that the Internet has not provided a positive effect on life in today’s world.
First, the massification of social media websites and apps, such as Instagram and Facebook, have created an online community that exposes people to the lives and stories of others. While this may at first seem to improve our connection with friends and family that are far away, in today’s world it created a culture of constant comparison to the successes and failures of others. For example, a report on teenage eating habits found that teenage girls that spend more hours on social media have a greater chance of developing eating disorders such as anorexia nervosa.
On the other hand, the opportunity to express your opinions anonymously on the Internet has also facilitated online-bullying. People are less worried about consequences when they are not face to face with the person they want to aggravate, so in turn they are even more relentless when harassing someone. This has enormous consequences in today’s world, where the cases of death by suicide are continually rising. For example, in America 20% of suicides are related to cases of online bullying.
Finally, websites and social media have exposed users to great amounts of fake news, which in turn leads to confusion and conflicts. For example, in Chile, the social conflict that erupted in 2019 was an event closely followed by different news sources, including the Internet and social media. In this critical situation, many chains of text citing false information were shared over Whatsapp, which exacerbated the polarization of different social classes.
In conclusion, the widespread use of the Internet in today’s world has a mainly negative impact, creating opportunities for body image issues, bullying and misinformation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28104575163 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87062253691 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584967320261 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.9108347538 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175714881196 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616270273417 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844237832969 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118949634088 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984564076857 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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