Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
While some believe that the Internet has an adverse effect on society, I'm afraid I have to disagree with this. In my opinion, The Internet has a tremendous positive impact on people's lives. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the learning process has become easier than before. Any individual can effortlessly access any teaching channel on the web. I remember when I was preparing for my dental board exam in order to pursue my dental career in the United States. I couldn't find local tutors in my country to help me overcome the exam difficulty. In the beginning, I was frustrated and overwhelmed, but a friend of mine suggested an expert online tutor. Fortunately, with his help, I was able to ace the exam with high score. Therefore, I had the opportunity to achieve my goal and had accepted to a well-respected dental program at North Carolina State University. If I did not have access to the Internet, I would not be able to accomplish this challenging task.
In addition, The Internet plays a significant role in connecting people from all around the world at an affordable cost. Especially the families. For instance, when I moved to North Carolina, I was heartbroken and anxious because I cloud not see my family as much as I used to do. Until a friend of mine introduced me to the social media world, specifically Google due. By using this application, I never felt being home-sick since I was contacting my mother and father several times throughout the day. Not only this, but also I had the chance to attend my elder sister's wedding virtually. That is why I believe the Internet has more advantages to the people if they know to use it the right way.
In conclusion, I believe that the Internet changes people's lives to be better. It is a luxury tool that we are blessed to have. I highly recommend constantly using it the correct way to get the maximum benefits. Because it can help take the career to a whole new level and connect individuals together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67688022284 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77161153949 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58495821727 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.408751694 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.3181818182 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3181818182 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141376386647 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379227252914 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400138221767 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917667316396 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478952799199 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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