Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decision for them; today young people are better to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons
In the modern age, people have many sources to help them for better determination. Also, Teenagers must make a determination to crucial events. Whether, today, juniors are more rely on fathers and mothers to make a conclusion than past or not is controversial. According to what I believe that young people are really independent on the caregivers than the previous generation; Therefore, I agree with this proposal. The following paragraphs by containing the main reasons will substantiate my viewpoint.
The main reason what I believe in this age, children are independent than the previous generation for make intention is they have many sources of information. To elaborate on my point, today, since people who want make a determination have many sources such as television, internet, books, newspaper, and many other similar items and containers, they can better analyses events; hence, young people can smoothly make the decision. In other words, having the high quality of sources help to people not only to make the right decision but also to make an intention easier than past. A significant example that strikes my mind is my own experience. When I was studying at university, I had to make the hard decision about future work. Therefore, I decided to improve my information, for made a superior decision. At first, I got help from my parents, but I survived many sources like internet, books, and paper in order to I make intention in the right way. Thus, it is showing that young people are really unconstrained for the hard and important decision.
In addition, I think that teenagers give help from their parents, but finally they do what they want. In other words, because parents have obsolete information, young children prefer to make a decision independently. If parents try to update their information, children would more ask them about a decision. In conversely, guardians have valuable experience so that they can prevent the possible error which their children want to do.
To conclusion, I generally hold the opinion that in this day young people tend to make intention with their own. Because they have more information than previous generation and parents don’t have up – to - date information.
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- TPO 34 76
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- TPO 42 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, hence, if, really, so, therefore, thus, i think, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1510989011 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92296027233 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3468197488 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6842105263 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332570893082 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104716009125 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640655495977 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211093702344 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236426157909 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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