do you agree or disagree with the following statement? in the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
That having decision for the future and what we will want to do plays an important role in our life is an undeniable fact. should we realize the significance of having a suitable future in our life, we will ponder over it much more scrupulously. as far as I'm concerned, I personally believe that nowadays young people can make better decisions than past can. this issue has recently been the topic of debate among sociologists.
I believe that juveniles and young people can decide for their life by themselves or by a little help of their parents. and these are my justification, To begin with, as you know smartphones and in intent make information too accessible for everyone especially young people and they can use these facilities in order to give a lot of information so that the can use them in order to make appropriate decisions for their life. therefore, expanding uses of technology among people help them to opt their career and other decision by alone. the second reason why I advocate this point of view liaising the fact that different among young people and parents expand and this problem gets decisions of parent useless for young people. hence, there is no doubt that update information creates better results. the last but not the least when I want to select my university my parents talked with me to select IT engineering but I selected sociology because they thought that engineering has better job opportunity because they did not have any novel information of careers. therefore I decided myself.
having discussed the issue from that point of view. I would rather look at it from another perspective because a coin has two sides as well, parents have so experiments that we should use their experiments in our life and they love us and say us what is the best. Hence, ignoring them is not suitable.
By taking all the above- mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drown about the issue. Underestimating the significant new information in our life is not logical. attending to this issue meticulously contributes to making better decisions in our life. and can improve several aspects of our life.
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- TPO42 3
- Why go to university? 73
- summerise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific point made in the reading passage. 80
- summerise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific point made in the reading passage. 80
- summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage. 68
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, no doubt, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90163934426 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80182431195 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535519125683 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3178450155 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316718491788 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861145889364 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925702899567 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158854906496 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111187233712 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.