Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
In this progressove and developed world, people prefer to wear different clothes in different situation. Now some people believe that our behaviar are influenced by the clothes that we wear. however, the other group refused this view point by claiming that different situation is the cause of the behavior change not clothes. my own view point are a bit closer to the second group. In other word, I disagree with the statement of clothes can chenge people personality and behaviar. my resons are as follow.
First of all our behaviar get derived from our personality and which we learn from our childhood. Therefore, external stuffs can't influence on it. The only difference is the situation that we are in. we all saw different people in different events and gathering. As they wear different clothes, we think that the clothes chenged their behaivar. On the other hand we over look the fact of various gathering has different requirement. we cant talk and behaviar in same manner when we are with our friends or with our coworker.
Secondly, the behavior change by clothes takes just few minutes. After that the person will behave like the thing that he\she behaviar in other situations. I dont want to put a way the fact that clothes chage out behaviar. but its in a differnt way. we cant run by heels. however, it cant influence on our behaviar and the way that we are talking.
Thirdly, if it was true that clothes change a way that a person behaives. it should get used as a treatment on the cases who want to hurt themselves or others. In psycology there was many ways to treat a person who want to hurt inself. I'm not expert on psycology, however, I never hear the treatment of clothes change. Also people in prison wears the same clothes. however, if this essey is correct, we have to see that people with different crime have to wear in different manner.
taking account the aformentioned reasons and examples, I partially disagree with the claim that a person bihavior gets influenced by the clothes that they wear. The statement assumes that a clothes chenge is the main reason of the behaviar change. however, I think its not complete. Its completely correct that we wear completely different in various events. but the notion of the event changes our behaviar, not the clothe changes.
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...r childhood. Therefore, external stuffs cant influence on it. The only difference is...
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... of the event changes our behaviar, not the clothe changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, i think, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7864321608 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55849596807 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462311557789 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4671954732 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2666666667 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.88709677419 368% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299580406125 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086561090101 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726435632858 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185812525978 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536396535505 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.