Do you agree or disagree with the following statement, playing sports teaches people more lessons about life
we art part of the modernization and a dynamic life change accompanied by modifications and new habits.
Almost all of us play sports whether indoor or outdoors. Some people believe that physical activites are very important to our lifestyle not only for the health benefits but a great way to learn more vital lessons.
I strongly belive in activities as a major role in personality formation and improving skills, or better adaptation to differerent situations.
First of all, joining a team with different members will enlarge your membership group and make you interact with alot of them at the same time. it is interesting and thrilling to see a footboll match and review their actions from another point of view. my own experience is a compelling example of this. During senior year of high school I was selected to play for the third time representing our class. I met most of my bestfriend and the other players are today my best friendsd. While the rest of my classmates were going out or playing videogames I was experiencing the true friendship, mixed feelings of excitement and sadness, all in one. with my crew. Those all kept us together and made me confident that i could rely on them.
Secondly, chess has been always in my journey. Its a game the challenges everyone all the time and keeps you in tension until the very end. whether online or with somene else right in front of you, it is like your surfing the real life.chess has tought me the most important rule of life, patience. For instance being indolent and capable of a dapt tftscenarios, never experienced before is a valua uncomparable to anything else. How many times we just figure out the correct reason to solve the problems? In addition, chess is liek the other side of life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, while, as to, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74399293037 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6058383224 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13968500628 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370169861759 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399458892339 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637548624732 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396350687897 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.