Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
When we mentionstory, the first thing that comes to our mind are the old, beautiful partially destroyed uilding or very well maintained. Would you like to ruin your childhood memories?
In my opinion everthing from the past whether valuable or less important, should be preserved and taken care beacause represent who we are today. I feel this way for two reasons which ill explore on the following essay.
Firstly, all the historical monuments are a live proof of our anteccedents. Most of them demonstrate a new style of construction with different techniques and materials from the ones we use nowadays. Consequently, by replacing those, we loose all the values of our great and talented professionals, my own experiene is a comelling example of this. I am born and raised in A historical city called Korca. there is a part of the city the belongs to UNESCO and is preserved for the intersting and special style that was made of many many years ago. Every house, the steets, the light or the stones, remain the same all the time moreover we have the other part of the city that is populeted by appartments and very busy commercial centers. very nicely you can find the combination of modern and the traditional and all the adventures and the great time you can have there.
Secondly, if you replace all this treasures with modern objects, everything will be the same. Since we are so old fashioned obout our culture, we have improved so much the tourism, and as a result we have more people ocoming the visit the country and the economy issgoing up and up. For instance, more people move to our area, more hotels, more restaurants and happier lifestyle for the hard working ones. For example my brother lives in the modern part of the city and has a coffe store that is inside a very old builiding, where they serve drinks just like in the old times. He points out that the key of success is the fact that people feel like they are living in the old times agaian for a little while.Personally, I believe that it still brings interest on me, just because i want to know more aabout something that i will never have to experience in reality.
In conclusion i strongly belive that is very beneficial for the community to save and take care of everything that has a historic value. this is because it helps them to perfect their community, economy and moral values
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67464114833 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65639883141 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547846889952 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1217811637 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163058361587 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499386425004 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317922289035 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810682448186 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243907371294 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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