Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so government should offer internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Technology has become an integral part of our lives. The world has come closer and distances have shortened owing to the advent of the internet. Therefore, in my opinion the internet should be provided free of cost to every citizen.
First of all, the internet has changed the way we lived our lives. Not only has it become a part of our everyday lives, but has also transformed the business world as well as the education system. With the classrooms going online and books becoming digitalized, the need for allocating a budget for school infrastructure has taken a sideline. Students in today's world have become acquainted with advanced technology and are productively using it to access a deluge of information. Laptops and Mobile phones have replaced books and a myriad of online learning applications are easily available through a click of the finger. In this scenario, imposing taxes on the internet will deprive the children to avail information and will disenfranchise them from getting up-to-date education online. For instance, in a remote valley in the North of Pakistan called Shimshal students who were forced to take online classes during the pandemic break were at a huge disadvantage as there was no internet availability. Students complained and wrote to the authorities but no action was taken. This put the students in a vulnerable position as no internet access meant missing out on important classes.
Furthermore, the internet is used by people of all age brackets. People use the internet for both education and entertainment purposes. Nowadays, online shopping has become easier as it cuts down the cost of travel expenditure spent on making a trip to the malls. People shop online for a wide variety of things like clothes, groceries, appliances, etc. Easy accessibility and that too at free cost will improve the online shopping experience and in turn accelerate the economy of the country.
In conclusion, it is the responsibility of the government to provide the people uninterrupted access to the internet at free cost and should give it as much importance as other frontiers like infrastructure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...way we lived our lives. Not only has it become a part of our everyday lives, but has a...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15561959654 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99611488417 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3489182422 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3888888889 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242518859095 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754653529368 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755734665423 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1727107457 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685039149634 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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