Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Spending too much time on watching sports on TV and following your favorite team would have a bad effort on your life.
Sports are famous all over the world, and many people are sitting in front of the televisions and computers watching them and acclaiming for their favorite sports stars. Especially in some great competition events in one field that the fans love, they even choose to stay up late, sparing no effort to support the team or person, excited all the night. But this phenomenon has given rise to a severe debate that spending too much time watching sports on TV and following your favorite team is right or not. From my point of view, I do agree with the statement, and I will elaborate it in the following paragraphs.
First of all, spending too much time watching sports makes us lose the balance of diet. What is known to us all, watching a TV program about sports will cost a lot of time, and during the period, most of the people opt to become a potato couch and do nothing but celebrate for their favorite team and people. They always drink beverage even binge drinking. They don’t care about the balanced diet and the food variety, and ultimately they also lose the healthy pattern of eating and exercise, they eat high-calorie snakes and laze. A good case in this point is that when the World Cup was held in Russia this year, some of my classmates went to the bar to watch the competition in TV, and they stayed there for few days. When the match was over, almost all of them looked fatter than before and screwed their life.
Secondly, spending too much time watching sports on TV will destroy the family relationship. Some people watching sports just for fun, but the people who are crazy at sports is another situation. They will let alone other things, urgency or not, spare enough time for the sports program. Unconsciously, they build a wall leading to the communication breakdown with others. For example, when my father gets lost in the sports program, he will concentrate on the TV and ignore everything happens around. One day, when my mother asked my father for help in some question about the decision of buying our house, my father didn’t notice my mom, still cheer for the soccer team. My mom got annoyed and quarreled with him for a long time, leaving me depressed.
Admittedly, watching sports program does stimulate people to participant in the sports activities, let them knew how to cooperate with other and gain the perseverance during the sports competition, but we should notice the alarm that spending so much time in one thing isn’t a good phenomenon for our phycology and physiology, and we should get rid of the addict in order to be the real owner of our life.
Finally，I conclude that spending too much time in watching TV about sports isn’t a good thing for most of us, and it will damage our healthy diet, leave less time for family, and in many occasions, it will be bad to our physical and psychological health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...er and gain the perseverance during the sports competition, but we should notice the a...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... time for family, and in many occasions, it will be bad to our physical and psych...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69108910891 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4922615258 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506930693069 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.0782006682 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.684210526 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5789473684 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295399451115 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101746102286 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995267621787 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180333360809 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900944138794 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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