Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：Students nowadays are more interested in politics than in the past.
With the rapid technological progressing, information concerning about politics are becoming increasingly accessible for students than in the past, which can be conveyed by the conference held by the candidates who desire the electorates to vote for them and TV shows broadcasting News or the talk shows concerning about politics. It can not be denied that the convolution of the politics involved with party struggle and country sanction stymie students’ understanding of politics, which in turn leads to eradicate their interests of politics because they can not fully understand the infighting between parties and states . However, such a statement suffers both logical and factual fallacies and it should be scrutinized meticulously. As the as the accessibility of information, the well-established institution about politics and the intrigue of understanding political strategy are concerned, I strongly hold the opinion that politics arouse more interests of students than in the past.
Firstly, it is the technological development that enable political information to be conveyed to students more accessibly. With rapid of development of technology, electrical devices are stepping into nearly every family which makes it possible that every students suffice to have a glance at political news on TV or mobile phones. , Also, algorithm is also progressed due to the technology revolution. Given the fact that algorithm endows students opportunities to read more news that was has something to do with politics. Take the case of my friend, Mike , who takes an active part in political news on his phones. Because of the efficiency of the algorithm, increasingly number of contents about politics are diffused to Mike’s application so that he is able to explore the essence of politics and it also weapons him with political ideas. Attributed to the technological development, more interests of politics can be sparked.
Secondly, the policy nowadays involve students to participate in the political activities, like election for the presidents, voting for the representation of specific region and etc. In order to elect the optimal representation or the president, it is the responsibility of students that they should have a deep understanding of politics and the electors themselves about what had they done before to know them well in order to anticipate the boons that quantifiable electors will bring up. Given that it is of great importance of every vote for selecting a extraordinary representative, students are responsible for reading every clause of policy and the educational and cultural background of electors. As a result, their interests to politics will be aroused thanks to the involvement of politics.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that the students will be hampered by the complexity of politics that will obscure students’ understanding of politics,which in turn leads to an elimination of their interests of politics. Ironically, this statement does not hold under meticulous scrutinize. Although the politics sometimes comprises obscure and esoteric contents, the conflict between parties and the process of competing against another party can be intriguing for students. As long as students has been an active demographic in the arena of figuring out how one party fight against another one, complex but intriguing strategies will arouse them interests of politics. As a result, they might have a tendency to have an active demographic in the arena of politics.
In conclusion, a certain exposure to politics news, the responsibility of engaging in politics and intriguing strategies of conflict between parties will definitely spark their interests of politics. There are one thousand Hamlets in one thousand eyes, yet I am confident that my opponents will compromise to me after being shown to my article.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 100.0 52.1666666667 192% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3252.0 1977.66487455 164% => OK
No of words: 593.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48397976391 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93473315629 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25149949989 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465430016863 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1044.9 618.680645161 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1195808603 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.818181818 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9545454545 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264667470529 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084424286255 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632321583757 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146408103461 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713102755975 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 58.1214874552 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 86.8835125448 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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