The best way to truly relax and reduce stress it to spend time alone.
Nowadays, people are confronted with fierce competition in their life or study, like when people hunt for jobs, when students have college entrance examination and so on. So it is not uncommon that people encountering these puzzles will feel stressful. Thus, an outlet for them to relieve stress and relax can be highly necessary. From my perspective, the best way to do so is to spend time with others.
Spending time with others can help us better speak our pressure out. When people are caught in stressful situations in their work or study, people may try to deal with these themselves. They might try to spend time alone to do their favorite activities, aiming to relieve their tress. However, with pressure starting to accumulate, spending time along is not enough for reducing stress because certain negative feelings will also come along. Thus, spending time with others can provide them an opportunity to fulfill this. When we spend time with others, others can be listeners who is willing to share their anxiety and confusions causing stress. Also, if someone happens to undergo similar experience now or before, people can share some personal advice or some solutions to reduce these stress. My personal experience is a good example of this. At a time when I felt stressed with my final examination about one difficult class. I just spent time with my friend who had registered for this class before and had the same feeling last year. He just shared how he prepared for the exams and offered me some reviewing advice. After that, I felt more confident and thus my stress was reduced.
Spending time with others can double our happiness and strength relationship between them, which might get us truly relaxed. It is admitted that spending time along for some activities can be a good way for people to acquire happiness. But this happiness is only owned by themselves and might fade away quickly. Thus, spending time along only work out temporarily. However, when we spend time with others, we can not only do something meaningful together but also share how we feel from it. By exchanging our ideas and opinions with each other, happiness might be enlarged and can last longer. For example, the last time when I and my friends participated in the football game and eventually won the tournament, every team member expressed how they gained from this game and own innermost feelings about the team. Since all of us had played together and shared each other’s feelings, I could still remember this experience and thus feel relaxed whenever I was caught in some stressful situations.
Admittedly, some people prefer to spend time along since it can serve as a way to do their favorite activities without any interruption of others. But for most of the people, staying alone does not help to solve out problems fundamentally because they can not jump out of the box themselves. When baring such pressure for so long, people may suffer from unbearable consequences, like depression or even committing suicides, as is the case in many countries.
In conclusion, spending time with others is a more effective and positive way to reduce stress and relax.
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- TPO61 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, with pressure starting to accumulate, spending time along is not enough for re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2641.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95497185741 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59346780956 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485928705441 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 816.3 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7664027414 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3214285714 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0357142857 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295534177173 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090068855231 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888380321685 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209015952567 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108691598825 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.