Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students should not take part time job while they are studying in universities
most of people in the world think that students should not work a mini job while they are studying at universities
personally, I believe that its better to student work while they are studying in universities for several reasons
to begin with, they can increase their experience in the workplace My personal experience is a compelling example of this I worked in a restaurant I interact with different clients from several countries as a result I learned from them their culture and also have information from their country
secondly earns a lot of money, for example when I get money from my work I will be more independent so I can cover many things like a part of my university or travel expenses and whatever I want without the need to take money from my parents.
thirdly, increase my time management skills for example when I have work and study during the day I will prioritize things and also not waste time on some things not benefit me.
fourthly work encourage the student also create a great personality for example before I stated work I was reticent and introverted person but now i talk comfortably
that's why I think work part-time is benefit for student to engage in the real life
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 1977.66487455 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71563981043 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67109442009 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.1344086022 348% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 264.960793745 48.9658058833 541% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 331.666666667 100.406767564 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.3333333333 20.6045352989 341% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.0 5.45110844103 660% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201526755316 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119413102159 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590601159595 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118512104435 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908987302558 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 11.7677419355 306% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.89 58.1214874552 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 10.1575268817 289% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.28 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 10.002688172 550% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.0537634409 298% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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