Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A teacher’s ability to relate well with students is more import than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Besides partens, a teacher plays a guiding role in our life. Some people still claim that the most important feature for teachers is having excellent knowledge. However, I don’t think so. This essay is going to disscus why having ability to relate well with students is more significant than having such great knowledge of the course which they taught.
First of all, it is easier to attract students for some teachers who have good relationships with students. Undeniably, students are willing to acquire knowledge if they admire and like their teachers so that communicating and even building friendship with students is very crucial ability for teachers. Students will desire to study in a higher motivation when they relate very well with teachers. For example, I can recall that my linear algebra teacher is a so great person that his every lecture being very popular in our university and his students struggle to have an excellent grade to make sure that they wouldn’t disappoint him.
In addition, as life tutor, teachers should not only teach students academic knowledge but also can give some useful life advice for students. Hence, building relations with students is very pivotal since that students sometimes will feel confused about life when they leave away from their parents, they need some life guider who have a great relationship with them to help them to solve problems in their life. Taking my experience as an instance, I felt nervous and lonely when I was a freshman at the university. Fortunately, my problem was found by my teacher Lee who is good at relating students so that he encouraged me to join the school club and asked me to do research with his team. Thanks to him, I can spend my hardest time in the college. According to my experience, I believe that having the incredibly academic knowledge it is less important than creating a fascinating relationship with students.
In conclusion, this essay discussed that caused students more willing to learn academic knowledge and helped students to solve life problems by some great teachers who are establishing excellent relationships with their students. In my opinion, having an ability to keep wonderful relationships with students is becoming indispensable quality for teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15633423181 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78342054103 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512129380054 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0410322116 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5625 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27110177249 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099625430775 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589571057361 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196969742932 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257497710538 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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