Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "In twenty years there will be fewer cars on the road than there are today."
The number of cars 20 years from now is hard to predict if there will be an increase or decrease in number. Some people would think that vehicles will be double in quantities as time goes by. But in my vantage point, I would agree that automobiles will be lessened after 2 decades than what we have today. I feel this way for 2 main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
The fuels for sure will be more expensive and people would opt not to buy a car. This is one of the reasons why individuals try to just use public transportation instead of owning a car and pay for gasoline every now and then. For example, I personally want to have my own car even just for a show. But at the top of my head, I think it is not practical if I will buy one and just park it in my garage due to the rising price of petroleum. So, I would rather to just simply commute and save my money than to waste my cash in paying Diesel. For this reason, the total cars on the street will be reduced.
On the other hand, health is becoming a crucial issue nowadays that our atmosphere is becoming polluted. Burned gas produces harmful toxins that can affect our health especially those who have a weak immune system and that is because of too many cars on the street. For instance, my nephew who lives in the city mostly get lung problems like Pneumonia and Asthma because of inhaling pollens from the dust and carbon dioxide from the outside. Being in the pink condition is beneficial to all human beings. According, I think that pollution from motor vehicles is a big part that causes a lot of individuals to get sick.
Lastly, we are experiencing heavy traffic jam almost every day most especially in the urban areas. This matter seems to be a continues problem as time went along. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I live in a countryside where I have no problem with congested roads as I travel. But when I studied in the city, I experienced a terrible headache from consuming too much time on the road. Moreover, just to avoid being in the rush hour hence I have to get up early.
Thus, with the above in mind, I strongly believe that there will be a decline in the use of cars 20 years from now. This is due to conserving fuel, medical related issues, and worsening road blockage. If we will be more knowledgeable about the effect of numerous transportations on this planet Earth then we will be able to attain the common good for the next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...ad of owning a car and pay for gasoline every now and then. For example, I personally want to have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38611713666 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49123042521 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546637744035 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.08320599 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2083333333 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45833333333 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181983989613 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541027848681 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490195516416 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110863313112 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657665749925 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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