Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "In twenty years there will be fewer cars on the road than there are today."
The number of cars 20 years from now is hard to predict if there will be an increase or decrease in number. Some people would think that vehicles will be double in quantities as time goes by. But in my vantage point, I would agree that automobiles will be lessened after 2 decades than what we have today. I feel this way for 2 main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraph.
The fuels for sure will be more expensive and people would opt not to buy a car. This is one of the reasons why individuals try to just use public transportation instead of owning a car and pay for gasoline every now and then. For example, I personally want to have my own car even just for a show. But at the top of my head, I think it is not practical if I will buy one and just park it in my garage due to the rising price of petroleum. So, I would rather to just simply commute and save my money than to waste my cash in paying Diesel. For this reason, the total cars on the street will be reduced.
On the other hand, health is becoming a crucial issue nowadays that our atmosphere is becoming polluted. Burned gas produces harmful toxins that can affect our health especially those who have a weak immune system and that is because of too many cars on the street. For instance, my nephew who lives in the city mostly get lung problems like Pneumonia and Asthma because of inhaling pollens from the dust and carbon dioxide from the outside. Being in the pink condition is beneficial to all human beings. According, I think that pollution from motor vehicles is a big part that causes a lot of individuals to get sick.
Thus, with the above in mind, I strongly believe that there will be a decline in the use of cars 20 years from now. This is due to conserving fuel and medical related issues. If we will be more knowledgeable about the effect of numerous transportations on this planet Earth then we will be able to attain the common good for the next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...ad of owning a car and pay for gasoline every now and then. For example, I personally want to have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34146341463 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42769727501 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2954695673 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17602662354 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605485831768 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542533653798 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117949499603 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675819332449 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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