Museums, a country's significant element, have been valued and even triggered heated discussion. In some people's views, visiting museums may not be a good way to learn about a country. Contrary to these people's views is my perspective that visiting museums is the best way to discover a country due to the contribution to efficiency and historical knowledge.
Visiting museums is an efficient approach to learning about a country because it enables us to minimize the time spent on it. To be specific, museums provide us with the most important components of a country's origin and development. Scrutinizing these historical elements facilitates us to have deep insight into the country's sources, culture and language. Thus, we can learn about a country in a relatively short time. In addition, volunteers, who can better elucidate perplexing historical issues, always afford an enormous number of meticulous details. And our confusions are always answered by them timely, which also accelerates our construction of a historical knowledge base. On the contrary, we probably can not learn about a country quickly if we are not equipped with such key materials and instruction. Moreover, discovering a country through museums also reduces errors, thus making it effective. In detail, the exhibited materials, such as paintings and ancient artifacts, are authentic. And their historical explanation is also strictly defined by the local museum administration. That means there are fewer errors. However, we may confront a great deal of misinformation if we learn about a country in haphazard ways, such as by surfing the Internet. Therefore, visiting museums is a productive manner to learn about a country because it can reduce time and errors.
Visiting museums is conducive to scrutinizing a country because it supplies us with a large quantity of knowledge. The materials exhibited in the museums come from a variety of time periods. For instance, you can immerse yourself in the paintings from the era when people lead a nomadic lifestyle to the modern time. In addition, you can also find materials from a wide range of territories such
as the tools used by habitants from separate continents. Thus, museums always provide you with a wide range of knowledge. Hence, visiting museums is beneficial to study a country.
It seems that travelling to a country is also a superior way to learn about it. It is because one can learn about a country's culture and language by travelling to different places and communicating with various residents. Through communication, we can also comprehend historical events. However, travelling sometimes is not the most ideal way to learn about a country owing to the cost of travel. Specifically, we need to pay for air tickets, travel insurance, expensive hotels, etc. Thus, our travelling time is limited by our budget, which is detrimental for us to learn about a country.
To conclude, visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country because we can get access to plenty of knowledge efficiently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... elucidate perplexing historical issues, always afford an enormous number of meti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2566.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22606924644 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03388364257 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456211812627 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 816.3 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.653058381 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4827586207 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9310344828 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27586206897 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35578459652 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108725616228 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875505662993 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218872600584 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596009469487 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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