Diets, the foundation of a healthy lifestyle, have been valued and even trigger a heated
discussion over whether family meals are still significant nowadays. Eating with
family members, in some people’s views, should not be valued. Contrary to these
people’s opinions is my perspective that it is crucial to have meals with families, due to the contributions to people’s health and interpersonal relationships.
What must be prioritized is that having meals with family members, instead of dining in restaurants, will contribute to people’s health, both physically and mentally. To begin with, it is family meals that ensure physical health for people. To be more specific, at home, people will take in cleanly washed and newly prepared vegetables and meat, which guarantee that people can absorb nutrition comprehensively; on the other hand, these + fresh ingredients and well-balanced meals will not be gained if people eat themselves outside. Moreover, by having dinners with families, people will keep mental health. In detail, during the process of dining with families, members will discuss over pleasant memories, including childhood stories, parents’ wedding and family trips, distracting = which distracts them from pressure; on the contrary, such delightful moments in the past will possibly not be pondered by a person, who has a meal outside.
What should be equally worth discussing is that family meals, compared with diets in
restaurants, contribute to strong bonds with family members, by encouraging them to
exchange information and render assistance to each other. To begin with, never should
we neglect the importance of routine family meals to the communication with family
members. To explain it further, the more frequently family members gather together
for meals, the more likely they are to discuss their recent physical status, children’s
performances at school and adults work prospects; on the other hand, the recent
situation, at school, in workplaces or in life, will be not exchanged if a person eats alone. Furthermore, it is well-acknowledged that having meals with family members
stimulates family members to help each other. During the family union, people,
through talking with their relatives and parents, can present the problems encountered
recently, inviting others to propose methods; however, will relatives do a favor to each
other if people refuse to have regular family meals together?
Health, the foundation of a person’s life, can be improved by one eating at home.
Relationships, vital recipes for happiness, will be constructed by one dining with
families. To conclude, only by having frequent family meals together can people
harvest multiple benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2341.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62740384615 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94384867976 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533653846154 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 4.94265232975 384% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.7036398625 48.9658058833 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.3125 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.53405017921 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348592809219 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141219229599 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797896885126 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117341207769 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13544139525 0.0645574589148 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.