Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The issue of whether having many different types of tasks to do is more satisfied or doing similar tasks all day long is hot debated one. On one hand, some people may prefer to work different types of tasks at the same time, since they can change the mood. On the other hand, others may prefer to do similar tasks all day long, since it is easier. For me, I believe having many types of tasks to do is more satisfied.
To begin with, it is true that doing different types of tasks at the same time can sometimes be undesirable to workers, since multitasking often causes confusions to them. I believe a lot of people may have same experience as I have. I remember when I just started working as a research assistant, I was completely unfamiliar with my duties. Unfortunately, my boss was a busy scholar so he has many on going projects at that time. Since he could not handle all of them by himself, he would always assign different tasks from different projects. Of course, a fresh assistant like me could not handle those tasks well. As a result, I always got confused which project that I was working on, so I was really frustrated.
However, having different types of tasks to do still has its merit. We all know that if we are doing the same task for the whole day, we would feel tired easily. So multitasking provides us a perfect solution, since we can change our mood through changing the task they we are working on. For example, when I was working as a research assistant, preprocessing the data is the most unattractive task for me. Because I had to stare at those numbers all day, so I always got bored and tired easily. Nevertheless, since I had many tasks to work, every time I felt tired of preprocessing the date, I would switch to other tasks such as coding to change my working mood.
Moreover, multitasking is one of the most important skills for manager. Since the higher position that we are, the more responsibility that we need to take, managers always have to handle different business at the same time. For instance, the sales manager in my company. Since the sales manager in my company is responsible for most of the business in the company, I often see him dealing with at least three customers at the same time. In contrast, me as a business representative, dealing one customer is challenging enough for me. Thus, to become a manager, I still have a lot to improve.
In conclusion, despite the difficulty of multitasking is much higher than working similar tasks, the benefits that it brings us are much greater than working like a machine.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
The issue of whether having many different types of tasks to do is more satisfied ...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
...I believe a lot of people may have same experience as I have. I remember when I just start...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... boss was a busy scholar so he has many on going projects at that time. Since he could n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5788336933 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66763755695 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444924406048 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.94265232975 324% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8698199611 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2916666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.95833333333 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281336382454 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937155622066 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104421903184 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168009915921 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136872941012 0.0645574589148 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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