Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Throughout history, human beings have been considering the most prominent factors to amplify happiness in their lives. In this regard, many people are inclined toward this opinion that people in the past used to be more cheerful than today while the others are thoroughly opposed to this notion. I firmly contend that the latter group holds more logical point of view. In the following paragraphs, I will try to pinpoint my perspective.
The first striking point that should be mentioned is that in the past, the level of health was not as high as now, and families were not informed about personal and social health care. In addition, there were not plenty of cures or medicines available for mass population. So, according to what statistics show, the death toll dramatically was higher than now, and many people perished because of very simple illnesses that nowadays are not assumed as strict issues, so these days people relatively have easier life and do not suffer from different kinds of diseases.
Another equally important point is that technology development has made life easier and people do not have to do a lot of tasks which they used to do in far years ago. Nowadays, computers and machines do most of the overwhelming activities which people used to do manually. Such as washing up clothes, sweeping the house and so on, so our life is remarkably more facilitated in comparison with our previous generations', and as a result, people have a lot of free time to spend on their hobbies and interests.
Moreover, the economic growth has provided opportunity for families to allocate their money for wider range of food and other basic items. Besides this issue, they are able to spend more money on clothes, outfits, cultural products and luxury items in their life whereas in the past financial constraints deprived many people of covering all these expenses. For instant, rarely did families go to a trip because money was considerably limited.
To sum up, all the aforementioned reasons endorse the fact that nowadays due to the expansion of technology and economy, people have easier life, so they are significantly more satisfied of their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99723756906 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6565179645 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566298342541 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2480265397 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.214285714 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247140928123 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731243627205 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463107387849 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127007394388 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402042722644 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.