Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Since the dawn of humanity, people strive to prepare a better environment for themselves and their family. They use some methods to bring happiness and entertainments inside their life. In this regard, a controversial question that arises is whether people was more happy and satisfied in the past or nowadays. I personally disagree with this statement, and I will provide some reasons to elaborate on my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, individuals access a plethora of facility that they were not available in the last decades. Nowadays, everything is changing at a galloping rate since the technology is improving and make easy doing some hard tasks for people. In the past, ones needed to spend a great deal of energy on some works such as building materials for construction, but by invention of some machines all of these works have been very easy. Furthermore, people can access to numerous entertainments that have been provided by technology improvements. For instance, people can have memorable time along with their families for having fun by going to travel. In the past, there were not numerous transportation and they had a plenty problems for having trip. On the other hand, people nowadays are able to use their personal cars or other means of communication such as airplane, train, etc. for having fun time. Thus, it is obvious that technology have been changed the world and have provided better environments for individuals.
Moreover, people can communicate with other people all around the world more easily. In the past, people lived in small cities or villages and they did not access to speak and communicate with other countries people. But nowadays, thanks to technology ones can communicate with other nations by the Internet. This approach help people to get antiquated with many peoples' opinion and find friends and spend their free time with them. In the past, people only confide in their city and they had some basic means of entertainments. For instance, I had found new friend form social media few years ago. Now, I spend my leisure time with him.
However, some people might believe in the past people had less stress and tension rather than nowadays ,but I strongly disagree with this because in the past people had a plethora of problems for finding a well-paid jobs, preparing and using nutrient meals for their family, having proper health centers, and so on. On the other hand, all of these problems have been solved and provide best environments for people. therefore, ones' stress are decreased when they face problems like these.
To wrap it up, I am of the opinion that nowadays people are more satisfied with their lives rather than past. Not only do they access abundance facilities, but also they socialize better and this is very imperative for having happy life.
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- TPO 44 Integrated Writing Task 65
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 65
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TOEFL T P O 46 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- T P O 53 Integrated Writing Tasks 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04042553191 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66895706679 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485106382979 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0335139322 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.76 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326452444589 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940196923935 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080678813884 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204576529132 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508249083245 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.